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carlyinromeDay Six: Write a scene in six sentences in which a character is searching for someone in the last moments of the end of the world.
It was kind of beautiful, the comets tearing through the atmosphere streaking the sky sparkling silver. That was the surprise, maybe, about the end of the world—the beauty.
Ray pushed through throngs of people just standing in the night, their faces uplifted to the beauty and the horror. He found Crow Horse finally, standing in the middle of the street where he’d been directing traffic until the people driving had just stopped their cars and got out to look at the sky.
“I guess maybe it doesn’t matter much, not anymore,” Ray said, “but all I wanted was to be with you.” Crow Horse held him tight, and Ray closed his eyes, everything falling to black.
Ray pushed through throngs of people just standing in the night, their faces uplifted to the beauty and the horror. He found Crow Horse finally, standing in the middle of the street where he’d been directing traffic until the people driving had just stopped their cars and got out to look at the sky.
“I guess maybe it doesn’t matter much, not anymore,” Ray said, “but all I wanted was to be with you.” Crow Horse held him tight, and Ray closed his eyes, everything falling to black.
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Date: 2012-06-14 04:15 am (UTC)My heart. That ripped me to pieces in all of six seconds.
Is it weird that I want a Thunderheart!Apocalypse AU?
Ray would totally be Sybil and it would be AWESOME.
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Date: 2012-06-14 02:49 pm (UTC)Omigod.
I totally want to write that now.
What are you DOING to me . . .
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Date: 2012-06-14 05:26 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-02-06 10:32 pm (UTC)I LOVE it that Walter is directing traffic, doing his job, right till the end. I'm thinking Ray was not on the rez until the apocalypse was imminent, that he drove
like a madman to get to Walter. <3